Trapped

July 5, 2003, 4:22 am

TrappedThese barren walls have my freedom trappedThis isolated apartment brings terrorWhen he is hereThe kitchen, my havenMyself, an expendable maidAnd he, undoubtedly the dictatorThe gray cracked...

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July 5, 2003, 5:04 am

Enormously well stated, your passion for this subject shows.

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July 5, 2003, 5:57 am

and that you've expressed very well Jen, intense and very vivid... wonderfully done. ~Mystic~"Imagine no daylight only the moon as your guide, When ours is to darkness what forgotten sun is too...

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July 5, 2003, 11:02 am

Jen: Wow you sure expressed this well and the imagery was so vivid..it made me hold my breath. Thanks for this excellent piece. Deb

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July 5, 2003, 2:21 pm

Jen,I sensed the horrors of feeling helpless in this write. Scary!Annette

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July 5, 2003, 11:39 pm

I just wanted to reach in and fly away with you........

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Stunningly vivid! I held my breath and almost sighed at the end. Fear captured with great passion, well-done!~NehaIf you cannot be a poet, be the poem. ~David CarradineWhere your national flag flies...

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July 10, 2003, 10:03 pm

Wow! Jen! How passionate you are. Your pen explodes in blazing lightning and thunder. How I dream to be the bullet in you gun. Live or die according to your finger. But as you escape to freedom, so...

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July 15, 2003, 11:17 am

Jen a subject that fascinates me I have worked with abused woemn and can never understand ho often having been assisted to escape they go back to their tormentor ivor

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